That was so hot! I've never seen a VN map out a scenario so meticulously, that must have been a lot of work, but it really paid off! Great scenario in the first place. I'm really looking forward to more. I'm very into the age gap and a few of those planned chapter sound just up my alley. Great work!
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This is a really promising game, I like it so far, but I have 2 critiques.
First I think the minigame is a tad too long, especially for how simple it is. Cutting the lenght by like a third or even more could be nice.
And second, I feel like the characters lack diversity. They look very similar. I feel like it could be good to shake them up a bit, like maybe make the King (I guess I havent really seen him yet) a bit more chubby and old, the bandit could be a bit more on the lean side and the Blacksmith a bit more bulky. That would kinda be the stereotypes for those characters I guess. Your call.
But other than that I love it!